Title:
Headline Length Dramatically Affects Profitability
Author: James Brausch
Article:
Recently, there was a debate on a popular Internet marketing
forum about headline length. Some argued that longer headlines
conveyed more information and had a better chance of catching
the attention of your prospect. Others argued that some
headlines were so long that they became confusing and took away
your breath if you attempted to read them aloud. Some claimed
that extremely long headlines appeared to be run-on sentences
even if they technically weren't.
I decided to do a study. In the end, I wanted to compare
profitable sales pages to unprofitable ones. I wanted to see if
there was a difference in their headline length.
To do that study, I first had to get a list of profitable sites
and another list of unprofitable sites. I actually already had
that due to another study. However, many of the unprofitable
sites had disappeared from the Internet.
There is no surprise in that. Why stick around if you can't make
a profit; right?
I had to settle for comparing the headlines of profitable sales
pages to the average sales page. I used my list of profitable
sites and counted the words and characters in each headline. If
no headline existed, I skipped that site. I then looked at sites
with ads running on the major search engine for the same product
or service. I randomly picked one and also counted the words and
characters in it's headline.
The results were surprising. The average sales page has a
headline of only 10 words comprising 55 characters. The
profitable sales pages had and average of 14 words and 82
characters in their headlines.
The first thing we can conclude is that profitable sales pages
use longer headlines than the average sales page. That's not so
surprising.
The other finding was much more surprising. With only a handful
of exceptions in thousands of data points, a length longer than
150 characters was very rare. Can we conclude that extremely
long headlines aren't profitable?
No; there are other possibilities. However, we can conclude that
it is exceptionally rare for profitable sales pages to use
headlines longer than 150 characters. In fact, 90% of the data
points fell within 131 characters.
That is my new recommendation. I intend to only use headlines
that are at least 80 characters long and no longer than 131
characters and I advise the same to my clients.
This puts me and my clients right in the center of the
correlation group for profitable headlines. A headline isn't
everything, but it is an important factor to consider when
optimizing sales and conversion ratio. I hope you consider
following suit. If so, let me know if this advice has improved
your results. I look forward to hearing from you.
About the author:
James D. Brausch is the creator of the Glyphius software.
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